Today’s session was regarding harvard referencing. It is a very clever method of referencing people’s work, but in order to do this, I must reference this correctly. Always refer back the harvard referencing leaflet given by Ravensbourne.
When I sent my draft to Tracy, she mentioned how I started to be a bit chatty, which meant I was being quite informal towards the reader. Tracy does not mind this type of writing but I had to double check with Mark. His feedback was quite clear that a dissertation can’t be too informal. I will read over my dissertation again which I think is quite chatty and make changes.